No. XV. BURNS TO MR THOMSON. OPEN THE DOOR TO ME, OH! WITH ALTERATIONS. Oн, open the door, some pity to show, Tho' thou hast been false, I'll ever prove true, Cauld is the blast upon my pale cheek, The wan moon is setting behind the white wave, False friends, false love, farewell! for mair She has open'd the door, she has open'd it wide ; My true love! she cried, and sank down by his side, I do not know whether this song be really mended. • This second line was originally, "If love it may na be, Oh !” No. XVI. BURNS TO MR THOMSON. JESSIE.* Tune-"Bonnie Dundee." TRUE hearted was he, the sad swain o' the Yarrow, O, fresh is the rose in the gay, dewy morning, No. XVII. MR THOMSON TO BURNS. EDINBURGH, 2d April, 1793. I WILL not recognise the title you give yourself, "the Prince of indolent correspondents;" but if the adjective were taken away, I think the title would then fit you ex * The heroine of this song was Miss Jessie Staig, who married Major Miller, second son of Mr Miller of Dalswinton. She died young.-M. actly. It gives me pleasure to find you can furnish anecdotes with respect to most of the songs: these will be a literary curiosity. I now send you my list of the songs, which I believe will be found nearly complete. I have put down the first lines of all the English songs which I propose giving in addition to the Scotch verses. If any others occur to you, better adapted to the character of the airs, pray mention them, when you favour me with your strictures upon every thing else relating to the work. Pleyel has lately sent me a number of the songs, with his symphonies and accompaniments added to them. I wish you were here, that I might serve up some of them to you with your own verses, by way of dessert after dinner. There is so much delightful fancy in the symphonies, and such a delicate simplicity in the accompaniments-they are indeed beyond all praise. I am very much pleased with the several last productions of your muse your Lord Gregory,' in my estimation, is more interesting than Peter's, beautiful as his is! Your Here awa, Willie,' must undergo some alterations to suit the air. Mr Erskine and I have been conning it over; he will suggest what is necessary to make them a fit match.* WANDERING WILLIE, AS ALTERED BY MR ERSKINE AND MR THOMSON. Here awa, there awa, wandering Willie, Tell me thou bring'st me my Willie the same. Winter-winds blew loud and caul at our parting, Rest, ye wild storms, in the cave o' your slumbers, H The gentleman I have mentioned, whose fine taste you are no stranger to, is so well-pleased both with the musical and poetical part of our work, that he has volunteered his assistance, and has already written four songs for it, which by his own desire I send for your perusal. Blow soft ye breezes ! roll gently ye billows! But oh, if he's faithless and minds na his Nannie, While dying I think that my Willie's my ain. Our poet, with his usual judgment, adopted some of these alterations, and rejected others. The last edition is as follows: Here awa, there awa, wandering Willie, Tell me thou bring'st me my Willie the same. Winter winds blew loud and cauld at our parting, Rest, ye wild storms, in the cave of your slumbers, And waft my dear laddie ance mair to my arms. But oh, if he's faithless, and minds na his Nannie, But, dying, believe that my Willie's my ain. Several of the alterations seem to be of little importance in hemselves, and were adopted, it may be presumed, for the sake of suiting the words better to the music. The Homeric epithet for the sea, dark-heaving, suggested by Mr Erskine, is in itself more beautiful, as well perhaps as more sublime, than wide-roaring, which he has retained, but as it is only applicable to a placid state of the sea, or at most to the swell left on its surface after the storm is over, it gives a picture of that element not so well No. XVIII. BURNS TO MR THOMSON. WHEN WILD WAR'S DEADLY BLAST. WHEN wild war's deadly blast was blawn, A leal, light heart was in my breast, At length I reach'd the bonny glen, adapted to the ideas of eternal separation, which the fair mourner is supposed to imprecate. From the original song of Here awa, Willie,' Burns has borrowed nothing but the second line and part of the first. The superior excellence of this beautiful poem will, it is hoped, justify the different editions of it which we have given. Currie. * Variation, lines 3d and 4th: "And eyes again with pleasure beam'd, See No. XXIV. |